Replace one of the wings with a robotic one if possible. Replace the A-Ha with "Relax" by Frankie goes to Hollywood. He need's a sidekick, preferably a small animal with a tail and wings of it's own flying behind him, perhaps shooting at something in the distance. Maybe give him some scantily clad ladies and a cigar, just to boost the over-all "bad-ass" feel of his character.

It's not like the black ones picking cotton and the white girls holding a whip behind her. If you think it's racist it's because you've been raised to either think it is, or you worry alot about whats politicly correct. Who cares if the white girl has a grip on the black ones face, if it was reversed, nobody would pull the race card at all. Relax, just look at it as two people, nothing more, and thats all it is. Also, great edit on the voice.

Sad bunnies ftw.

It was synced for me, but my screen sucks so the "REFRESH" covered the "S" logo, I'm sure I'm not the only one who suffers from that.

He need's a little demon flying behind his head shooting at something, and possibly an explosion in a distant backround. I wont get around to checking if you add them later, I'm just gonna 5 it now on good-will that you'll do as I wish.