This could be a lot better. My recommendations are the following:
When the singer goes "Don't don't don't don't", have the Tase guy saying Don't over and over.
Also, when it comes to the yelling, it would sound better if it was more punctuated. Instead of ooooowwwwwwwww, it should be ow-ow-ow-ow and go along to the beat.
Implement both of these recommendations and you win.
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