Holy crap, this is awesome. You REALLY have to fix the second part where it goes into baritone territory - it's just too low and doesn't fit with the actual notes.
Actually, both of 'em had the thing with the funky 'stache. You need to extend it a bit further, I think, give it a bit of droopiness - Stalin had a full one, but Hitler had the little pencil-bar.
HA! Five for the concept, but a three because of that craptastic music you used. Try ripping the SPC from the Super edition, or Eye of the Tiger, or something fitting.
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