If the singer's voice didn't break on "blows," I'd give this site a five. Other than that, it's pwntastic. It should be redone with my mentioned suggestion. Heck, I could sing that line. PM me possibly.
More Grammar Nazis like you need to go out of their way to shoot uneducated civilians with knowledge. This is especially true when they do so in a CLASSY fashion.
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