Geordi Goes Through Data's Things
Created on: March 31st, 2011
Thinking Data is dead, Geordi goes through his things.
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To be honest I don't know. It just feels a little lacking but I honestly couldn't tell you what could bring this from average to great. Maybe some cleverly inserted audio edits and another really good visual gag? You're the artist here, not me. To be honest, I kind of lost my ytmnd creative spirit a while ago. I don't really know what happened but I haven't been able to come up with the ideas as easily as I used to. Hence the reason I haven't made any ytmnds in the last year.
the frame rate early on gives this a sort of stuttered pacing, but that's easily overlooked. the concept is hysterical, although resorting to tits and dicks is slightly easy; like a good fad framework, those jokes could have been anything (and would have been slightly better if they tied into something other than just loosely characterizing as a perv). also the chippendale farley isn't linked thematically to anything going on in the site (unless you consider that more of Data's sophomoric art - I'd have rather it been some Tasha Yar joke to tie it to the original scene), and it renders it more zany than clever.
don't get me wrong, loved it, definitely above par (though maybe not for you), just giving suggestions as asked...
don't get me wrong, loved it, definitely above par (though maybe not for you), just giving suggestions as asked...
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