Don't You Taze Me Bro!
Created on: September 20th, 2007
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This could be a lot better. My recommendations are the following:
When the singer goes "Don't don't don't don't", have the Tase guy saying Don't over and over.
Also, when it comes to the yelling, it would sound better if it was more punctuated. Instead of ooooowwwwwwwww, it should be ow-ow-ow-ow and go along to the beat.
Implement both of these recommendations and you win.
you're obviously aware that the start is choppy, but I like what you did at the end, and that you didn't over-ornamentalize the front end- you just tried to squeeze out enough to make it functional to set up the joke. good deal, and better than your other dtmb (which is still funny and well-done) because this one kind of has a real satirical point.
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