High School Editorial Graded
Created on: August 1st, 2006
High School Editorial Graded
dialhforhero 
lolstupidgirlies.ytmnd.com
High School Editorial Graded by a 'boy' in College (me).
http://collegeisntneccisarrie.ytmnd.com/
Cindi Lauper - Girls Just Wann Have Fun

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B-Tray
August 1st, 2006
4:01:41 PM CDT
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-1 for no come see me
puzz
August 1st, 2006
4:02:31 PM CDT
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bad music, not too good
TheX
August 1st, 2006
4:03:13 PM CDT
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wooooooowwwwww
mediumrare
August 1st, 2006
4:05:21 PM CDT
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overkill. it was already funnier by itself. and besides, a better edit would be to just scribble the whole thing out.
kiiiiingcombo
August 1st, 2006
4:06:04 PM CDT
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lol stupid girls.
Armitage112
August 1st, 2006
4:06:45 PM CDT
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This is the future of female America? God help us all.
chrisw15
August 1st, 2006
4:07:32 PM CDT
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wow... thats a real artical? lol
Skironox
August 1st, 2006
4:11:24 PM CDT
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lol what a dumb bitch
centralbandit
August 1st, 2006
4:14:25 PM CDT
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lame spin on original.
SakuraRox313
August 1st, 2006
4:15:31 PM CDT
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On the contrary, this is a great spin on the original and has better music.
andrew522
August 1st, 2006
4:15:33 PM CDT
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Wow. Now That is what I would call a stupid public school bitch. I love my preparatory school education.
sexymofo
August 1st, 2006
4:17:08 PM CDT
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you fail, please try again ^_^
timtastic
August 1st, 2006
4:17:17 PM CDT
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for taking the bait
Frontovik
August 1st, 2006
4:17:39 PM CDT
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Sorry, but your editting was kind of lousy.
NinjitsuMaster
August 1st, 2006
4:19:14 PM CDT
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wow, after reading the original i was wondering who would take on the daunting task of grading this piece of sh*t. Nice job
SausageKing
August 1st, 2006
4:21:59 PM CDT
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F for the syntax, B+ for the thesis, so let's cut it down the middle, give the gal the benefit of the doubt and C- that bad boy
tweek-20k
August 1st, 2006
4:24:50 PM CDT
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Someone find her address imo.
tripleOG
August 1st, 2006
4:24:55 PM CDT
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i like these graded YTMND's. only like, not like like.
bobthevicious
August 1st, 2006
4:26:07 PM CDT
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ownt
Virty
August 1st, 2006
4:27:33 PM CDT
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What a stupid bitch.
hamjamt
August 1st, 2006
4:29:19 PM CDT
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F-
bracomadar
August 1st, 2006
4:31:33 PM CDT
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LOL F- +5 for Cindy Lauper!
jdmn13
August 1st, 2006
4:32:15 PM CDT
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remove floating text and add it into the picture, 3'd for visibility
Phil246
August 1st, 2006
4:32:39 PM CDT
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unsurprising given the article - but funny nontheless :)
sAge
August 1st, 2006
4:34:45 PM CDT
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Stupid b*tches for the win...
ollj
August 1st, 2006
4:35:46 PM CDT
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too bad the source YTMND is gone
HockeyUSA27
August 1st, 2006
4:37:39 PM CDT
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LOL at "is that all girls do?"
quazyboyz
August 1st, 2006
4:43:54 PM CDT
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Golddigging bitch
Jargonecius
August 1st, 2006
4:47:27 PM CDT
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Your text is in the way of her name and I'm too lazy to save it and look for myself. I want to send letters to this dumb bitch.
mushroomkill
August 1st, 2006
4:48:22 PM CDT
(0)
Lol
Scipio77
August 1st, 2006
4:51:11 PM CDT
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nat20games
August 1st, 2006
4:52:49 PM CDT
(0)
Abolish womens suffrage.
Delphic
August 1st, 2006
4:56:03 PM CDT
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5 stars for 'graded' fad!
MicroKusa
August 1st, 2006
5:02:47 PM CDT
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I thought that music was best for the original. But I dont know why the guy didnt use it.... 5 anyways
URtheMANnowDAWG
August 1st, 2006
5:10:19 PM CDT
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more like F-------------- x100000
BadSyntax
August 1st, 2006
5:15:07 PM CDT
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It was pretty good.
scstonecs
August 1st, 2006
5:17:05 PM CDT
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one of the dumbest people in the world.
Tsmack
August 1st, 2006
5:17:14 PM CDT
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for serious?
mattdh12
August 1st, 2006
5:19:02 PM CDT
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i want to punch her in the face, shes basically asking for it.
hamporter
August 1st, 2006
5:19:17 PM CDT
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haha idiot
IXISIXI
August 1st, 2006
5:20:24 PM CDT
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She'll get really far with that attitude, let me tell you. But at least she's saying what half of the girls in college are thinking. She just doesnt realize that college throws the best parties.
Casty
August 1st, 2006
5:20:26 PM CDT
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Kill her now.
bokchoi
August 1st, 2006
5:22:03 PM CDT
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5'd because I am in a school newspaper and I honestly feel that this is how most our editorials will be next year. gg.
Goneja
August 1st, 2006
5:24:57 PM CDT
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I can't believe that. These kinda people should be shot at sight almost.
shinymathom
August 1st, 2006
5:25:38 PM CDT
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As a girl I'm insulted by the original article. I hope she marries a "boy" for money and ends up living on the street when he decides he wants someone with a substantial IQ.
BananaRebellion
August 1st, 2006
5:25:46 PM CDT
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pwnt lol
robh
August 1st, 2006
5:25:58 PM CDT
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get a job
michaelwolfson
August 1st, 2006
5:27:17 PM CDT
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take it to school, i don't care about education on ytmnd
chewbaccasaurus-rex
August 1st, 2006
5:30:19 PM CDT
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this b*tch should definitely consider college. 5'd for dumb b*tches.
astuteNacute
August 1st, 2006
5:31:51 PM CDT
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Add "see me after class" and this gets a 5.
Ophidios
August 1st, 2006
5:36:21 PM CDT
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That girl should be executed. For real.
Humphro
August 1st, 2006
5:39:19 PM CDT
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I wouldn't touch her with a bargepole, let alone marry her. Uneducated dumbass.
bonobomaster
August 1st, 2006
5:41:31 PM CDT
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f*ckING MOOCHER!!
ForeseenBaron
August 1st, 2006
5:46:52 PM CDT
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you win, please do it again ^_^
fatam88
August 1st, 2006
5:47:58 PM CDT
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WE MUST ATTACK, FIND OUT HER SCREEN NAMES, FIND OUT HER ADDRESSES, FIND OUT HER TELEPHONE NUMBERS, WE'VE GOT WORK TO DO, YTMND MEN!
igotnoname
August 1st, 2006
5:48:50 PM CDT
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dumb bitch
Blindor
August 1st, 2006
5:52:37 PM CDT
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wow, that bitch needs to be donkey punched
Thidranki
August 1st, 2006
5:52:42 PM CDT
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the best part was "Lynzee, for serious?" rofled = 5'd
Suilenroc
August 1st, 2006
5:58:17 PM CDT
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"Wow. Now That is what I would call a stupid public school bitch. I love my preparatory school education." GJ being born into money. lol.
painkiller
August 1st, 2006
5:58:32 PM CDT
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you just think you're soooooooooo cool with cindy dont you. queen4life
Lexan
August 1st, 2006
6:03:54 PM CDT
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THIS is the kind of girl that keeps women out of the presidency. Poor bitches.
mattjeast
August 1st, 2006
6:06:46 PM CDT
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the spelling of her name is goddamn hilarious.
St00pidman
August 1st, 2006
6:11:33 PM CDT
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God, I loved grading school newspapers. Sometimes I'll just take up the whole lunch period marking all the mistakes the editors made and return it to the idiots selling them and telling them, "Everyone in this room is now dumber for having read this." Ah, High School memories.
Rev-Lumberjack
August 1st, 2006
6:13:31 PM CDT
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She ain't messin' with no broke n****rs.
Switchblade
August 1st, 2006
6:17:22 PM CDT
(0)
PWNED!!!
DynX
August 1st, 2006
6:21:23 PM CDT
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Her whole article was about marrying a rich guy for his money and then expecting to be treated for this princess.
DynX
August 1st, 2006
6:22:25 PM CDT
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I mean like a princess^^
clg2005
August 1st, 2006
6:24:20 PM CDT
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Girls Pwned
Andrew555
August 1st, 2006
6:24:28 PM CDT
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We want prenup.
bhk
August 1st, 2006
6:25:19 PM CDT
(0)
Stuuuupid
Frostynecropyre
August 1st, 2006
6:26:01 PM CDT
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This is what happens when you give unintelligent people the right to free speech.
n0tj0sh33
August 1st, 2006
6:27:10 PM CDT
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This worrys me
TJourney
August 1st, 2006
6:27:21 PM CDT
(0)
5
galaxhood
August 1st, 2006
6:28:49 PM CDT
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I WILL f*ckING KILL YOU BITCH
Joelliam
August 1st, 2006
6:29:21 PM CDT
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And they say porn is demeaning to women...
ChickenOfDoom
August 1st, 2006
6:29:55 PM CDT
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Holy crap, that's the least logical thing I've seen all year.
shutupfool
August 1st, 2006
6:30:13 PM CDT
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You forgot a "don't" without an apostrophe. See me after class, Dialhforhero.
MasterSitsu
August 1st, 2006
6:30:51 PM CDT
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http://collegeisntneccisarrie.ytmnd.com/ - you miscredited your image.
TJourney
August 1st, 2006
6:32:44 PM CDT
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I typed quotes from this to a friend of mine; I found that due to the utter lack of any punctuation use, aside from periods, made my right hand lonely for its friend the comma.
str04
August 1st, 2006
6:33:10 PM CDT
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what a dumb bitch
dthsqd
August 1st, 2006
6:33:42 PM CDT
(0)
.. too bad 60 percent of girls in college are like this anyways
dialhforhero
August 1st, 2006
6:44:06 PM CDT
(0)
I added "see me after class" to the image and also fixed the credentials.
dialhforhero
August 1st, 2006
6:47:08 PM CDT
(0)
Thanks a lot for upvoting and the comments too, by the way.
Onel
August 1st, 2006
7:02:06 PM CDT
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99% of your corrections aren't even corrections. You're just being stupid, like her.
dialhforhero
August 1st, 2006
7:07:46 PM CDT
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Actually Onel, if someone were to write like this in - say, college. They would fail outright. The corrections I added were an attempt to make some sort of an advanced sentence structure that is beyond a 7 year old writing level.
BTape
August 1st, 2006
7:07:49 PM CDT
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It's sad that there really are a majority of people who still think this way. Not that I think the guy should rely entirely on a financially supporting wife, but rather that both the man and woman (or whoever) could financially support their family together.
Hixxy
August 1st, 2006
7:13:42 PM CDT
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Thank you.
TheOminousThey
August 1st, 2006
7:15:49 PM CDT
(0)
Finding something that could be phrased more elegantly isn't the same as finding a grammatical error.
AntwanDavis
August 1st, 2006
7:20:01 PM CDT
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I hae no problem with her feeling that way. I have a problem with the moron of a man that's gonna take care of her.
Mech
August 1st, 2006
7:21:16 PM CDT
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"99% of your corrections aren't even corrections. You're just being stupid, like her." Correct.
Mech
August 1st, 2006
7:22:22 PM CDT
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"your advanced language skills, correct grammar, and downright elitism give me a hard-on." Also correct.
rambunctiousrat
August 1st, 2006
7:26:02 PM CDT
(0)
.......
jkh77
August 1st, 2006
7:39:02 PM CDT
(0)
Get back in the kitchen!
genkidama20
August 1st, 2006
7:41:46 PM CDT
(0)
seems like this girl not only needs to go to college, but she needs to go back to grade school and learn how to write. 5'd for dumb women.
szissou
August 1st, 2006
7:49:02 PM CDT
(0)
5'd because i want to slap the person who wrote this.
TakeTheRedPill
August 1st, 2006
7:52:51 PM CDT
(0)
the irony of it all: She'll become a feminist.
Furluge
August 1st, 2006
7:58:18 PM CDT
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See, this is why prostitution needs to be legal, because this girl won't be able to cut it in a free market scenerio. Heh. I kid.. (Even though it's technically true.)
mybunnyownsyou
August 1st, 2006
7:58:42 PM CDT
(0)
kinda killed the joke :/
atomicdog
August 1st, 2006
8:03:03 PM CDT
(0)
5 for exposing people's stupidity so we can all ridicule it. THAT'S what YTMND is all about. :D
GyreneGenocide
August 1st, 2006
8:06:08 PM CDT
(0)
lolololololo im surprised she was allowed to put this in b/w - her mother must be so proud!
jimbo44311
August 1st, 2006
8:11:35 PM CDT
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I'm pretty sure this is a smart chick writing this as a joke. i simply can't imagine anyone is this ignorant.
blue-shift
August 1st, 2006
8:15:13 PM CDT
(0)
That bitch should be f*cking shot and left out to rot >_>
TacoGeddon
August 1st, 2006
9:08:27 PM CDT
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If I ever cross paths with this girl, I will be forced to slap her with a glove and challenge her to a dual. I shall win by using "Big words" her mind can't grasp.
mattdh12
August 1st, 2006
9:25:33 PM CDT
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oh yeah, what about lesbians? theyre screwed.
AngryRabbi
August 2nd, 2006
4:41:51 PM CDT
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What's she going to do in those four years while all the men are in college?
PCF
August 2nd, 2006
9:32:32 PM CDT
(0)
stupid bitch
Abdiel
August 3rd, 2006
10:15:58 PM CDT
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"Your the girl now bitch!" should be a site for all these kinds of ytmnds.
MediocreMarvel
August 7th, 2006
9:14:53 AM CDT
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This loopy c*nt needs a swift kick back into reality.
Inziladun
August 8th, 2006
1:05:36 AM CDT
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I don't understand this line of thinking. And to think the majority of people who think like this are offended by sexism when it comes from a man's mouth... But 5! For poking fun :P
TheRockBoS
August 8th, 2006
11:08:15 AM CDT
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I WAS going to marry her, but not anymore!
nickster2006
August 8th, 2006
11:01:11 PM CDT
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she dont have no educashonne, remembah?
Noodles311
August 17th, 2006
7:43:01 PM CDT
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I predict she will be performing favors for drugs in the near future.
cogknack
August 18th, 2006
12:06:36 PM CDT
(0)
there were mistakes but you added a lot of bs corrections.
Shugotenshi
August 22nd, 2006
11:21:24 PM CDT
(0)
pwnt
krowa04
August 23rd, 2006
7:41:08 AM CDT
(0)
What a dumb bitch, f*cking stupid whore
AKismet
August 25th, 2006
10:39:57 PM CDT
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If I met that bitch, I would pay her for that article. In rape dollars.
ddrfreek
August 25th, 2006
10:49:15 PM CDT
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I really hope this was in the April 1st edition.
Pizza-Z
August 29th, 2006
9:00:02 PM CDT
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Such stupidity should be forceably removed from the gene pool.
Godlol
August 30th, 2006
8:11:50 PM CDT
(0)
She should die.
JojoII
September 2nd, 2006
12:21:17 AM CDT
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Lol @ "F-". I bet shes going to be a prostitute when she gets older=p
wootsauce
September 5th, 2006
5:25:48 PM CDT
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Her ignorance is too much for me to comprehend, 5'd!
SenorAnderson
September 9th, 2006
5:38:34 PM CDT
(0)
Well, she is a dumb bitch.
Bgoon
September 11th, 2006
7:53:15 AM CDT
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Finally a woman I could donkey punch for a pink sock and leave the room and not feel guilty. What a dumb bitch.
Bgoon
September 11th, 2006
7:57:56 AM CDT
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Actually all those edits were correct. I got an A in english 210 because I don't type like this: "becuase people do stuff and things people need to do i cun do what I wat cuz my parents were divorced and im a dum latchey kid who was raised on money with no ethics hurrah!" That bitch is a gonna get knocked up by a n*gg*r. LAWL.
Anakite
September 14th, 2006
2:27:52 PM CDT
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Gawd, what a stupid b-...
Bongobass135
December 8th, 2006
11:06:25 PM CST
(0)
awesome
Zoomy
January 6th, 2007
12:15:20 PM CST
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5 for sexist stereotyping about women. By a woman.
kwyjibo2355
January 28th, 2007
10:15:49 PM CST
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what a dumb bitch.